Editing: Rough Cut 3

Today the class has a full day of media which has given Indya and i the opportunity to move forward with editing our film opening and applying the improvements given to by our audience (as seen in the previous post). Katy unfortunately isn't in today so although only Indya and i added the last improvements to the video ourselves, we can't move much further without the collaboration of Katy. To ensure each person is working at the same level and in doing the same volume of work, we have thus decided to not more further in terms of collecting audience feedback in response to our third rough cut. Currently we have spent nearly 2 hours adding improvements to our film opening. On completion we asked a fellow class member what they thought of the the rough cut to which they told us to alter some of the credits. One of the things he told us was that it would be better to delete '&' between the actors' names whilst moving Indya's name closer to the left. We have added this improvement to our film since we think it makes the opening look more professional. Furthermore he told us that rather than writing 'Directed by...' we should say 'A film by...' to make the credits seem less worded. However Indya and i decided to not add this improvement because we preferred to keep this credit the same.