Rough Cut of the Film Opening: 2

This opening, different to the first rough cut, has been improved on as a result of feedback given to us by our teacher who told us to alter a few shots in terms of length as well as a few other improvements. One of the main improvements she gave us was to add a very dark filter, darker than the subtle filter that was added at the start. In this rough cut we didn't include a darker filter because we would like the target audience to tell us what they think should be done about a filter before we actually add a very dark one into the opening. (This will be presented to the target audience before more improvements are made).